An argumentative essay
Respecting everyone is important
Okay so I
have this one thing that’s been in my head for a while so I decided to write
this text about it, hoping it would make someone to change their opinion. Why
is there still homophobia and transphobia in the world? Why would anyone be
affected by what’s on their neighbor’s pants or who is they living with? It’s
2015, why is equality so hard to reach?
I’m so
tired of these bible-arguments people are throwing at homosexuals, like “you
can’t get married because bible says it is wrong!” first of all, bible does only
say that “You shall not lie with a male as one lies with a female; it is an
abomination”, which can be found in old testament. Let me tell you, there is so
many more things that are “abomination” according to Old Testament and does
anyone give a crap about those? Nope. If you are divorced single-mother who has
three children with three different fathers, you have done so much sin you
probably shouldn’t make a number about someone being gay.
Other very
funny thing that occurs is “if a gay couple has children, they will be bullied!”
How about teaching your own kids that being different isn’t a bad thing? Kids
don’t born as hateful. They are taught to be that. My favorite argument is “a
child needs mom and dad!” so basically you want all the single mothers and
fathers to give up their children, very polite.
Speaking of
children, why is that when a couple is expecting they say “we don’t care if it’s
a boy or a girl, all we care is that it’s healthy”, but later their Mary
realizes she’s been born in a wrong body, she should’ve been born as a boy and
the parents throws her out saying “I gave birth to a baby girl not a boy.” It’s
just disgusting. I have many transgender friends and when they told me they are
trans and asked me to use different name and pronouns, of course I did it.
“I’ve used to call you Lily and not James”, is not an excuse.
“But you’ve always been a girl to me”, is not an excuse. Trans people do not change their gender because they want to, actually they don’t change it at all, they just correct it the way it should always have been.
“I’ve used to call you Lily and not James”, is not an excuse.
“But you’ve always been a girl to me”, is not an excuse. Trans people do not change their gender because they want to, actually they don’t change it at all, they just correct it the way it should always have been.
If everyone
could respect each other and not being assholes, that would be super great. If
you are a parent who has LBGTQ-child, don’t throw them out when they tell you.
Support them. That way we could prevent so many suicides and depressed kids. It’s
a fact that most of teenage suicides are committed by Trans kids who weren’t
accepted the way they are.
Amen! This is what world needs to hear.
VastaaPoistaBtw I love the way you're passionate about this thing :)
I chose this because I think this is one of my best essays. I know it's intensive, but so is my thoughts with this particular subject. I liked writing it and I still hope someone would change their mind after reading it. I think I succeeded with my point and should probably improve the grammar a bit
VastaaPoistaa)It does comply with the instructions, it has all five paragraphs.
VastaaPoistab)The subject was interesting and important and if people read more these kind of texts they would probably think about it more.
c)We found nothing wrong with the text it was well written!
d)Allma, Anniina, Jenifa